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Mercenary Process by Gargantuan-Media Mercenary Process by Gargantuan-Media
Different take on Kohr Axiom, a character by Dave Reddick from Legend of Bill.
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Tadpole7 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Looks good, only thing is that his his upper body and lower portion seem to be facing different directions.
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:icongargantuan-media:
Gargantuan-Media Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thank you for your input. Yes, this turn in the pose is intentional. I added a twist in the posture. Is this confusing or under-emphasized in the pose? Are you saying I should emphasize the twist in this pose more?
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Tadpole7 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Its the lack of transition in the hips. If the feet are facing that way the hip needs to shift a bit to accommodate the redirection. Currently you have that transition happening in the knees (painful).
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Gargantuan-Media Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Professional Filmographer
OK, I see what you mean. Thanks for the advice.
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Oni2030 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
I like that your designs are very intricate, but your line is clean it gives your work a rough lived in feel.
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Gargantuan-Media Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thanks, Oni. I going to ask for a critique on this one.
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